I thought it might help understand what I'm trying to tell you if I showed the composition of the quotes. They should look something like this:



setting: blah blah place, blah, what it's like, blah blah.
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I may not put this in the post all the time, just when it's necessary for you to understand


guy/girl/whoever is talking- (if they're yelling or doing something, it will be in the parenthesis) "Blah blah blah, talking *if there's a profane word I will change it and put it in the stars* blah!"




That's as detailed as the comp. gets, and if it's a conversation it will be the same thing just more of the  ' whoever- "blah!" '.

-KC